અમાનત

એ કબર તને હું એક ચીઝ સોંપતી જાઉં છું,
તું રાખજે સંભાળ એની એટલું કહેતી જાઉં છું…

નરાખજે તું તરસ્યો એને, હું અશ્રુ દેતી જાઉં છું,
ટાઢ તડકો પજવે નહી તેથી, આ કફન રાખતી જાઉં છું…એ કબર તને હું…

મારું સપનું લઇને સુતો છે એ, હું તેને આંખમાં ભરી જાઉ છું,
આમતો છું ખુદ્દાર, પણ હવે હું લાચાર બનતી જાઉં છું…એ કબર તને હું…

દીલ રહ્યું છે માત્ર પાસે, તને ધબકાર સોંપતી જાઉં છું,
કહેજે નહી તું કોઇને, હું તને હીર સોંપતી જાઉં છું…એ કબર તને હું…

જાગે કદી તો પુષ્પની આ નીશાની મુકતી જાઉં છું,
તારા પાસે એ કબર મારી અમાનત રાખતી જાઉં છું…એ કબર તને હું…

– “શબ્દ્શ્યામ”-આશિષ ઠાકર રચિત

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26 Responses to “અમાનત”

  1. pradip Says:

    how can i post my creations hare……
    is it possible?

  2. xxxx Says:

    આ કવિતા માટે તમારો ખુબ ખુબ આભાર માનીશ.. છેવટે મારે જે જોઇતું હતું તે મળી ગયુ હોય એમ લાગે છ..ે જો તમે ફેસબુક કે ટ્વિટર પર આ કવિતાઓ પોસ્ટ કરો તો સારુ રહેશે

  3. Shabdshyam Says:

    Dear XXXX,

    Thanks for your kind words of appreaciation. I am actually not very Comp-Savvy so I do not post my poems on FB/TWITTER. You may guide me in that case, I will be greatful….Regards,SHABDSHYAM-Ashish Thakar

  4. raaz Says:

    great sir su vat kahi ch a sabdo ma tame

  5. NILESHKUMAR BHAVSAR Says:

    GR8 !!!!!!!!!!! SHABDO MA SAHEL KARAVI , MOJ AAWI GAI . ASHISH BHAI , NAVI RACHNAO MATE PRATIKSHA REHSHE ,.

  6. Shabdshyam Says:

    Aabhaar Nileshkumarji ane Raaz aapno pan ghano aabhar..Thank you. Regards,SHABDSHYAM.

  7. Ashvin Says:

    Nice

  8. Jaimin Says:

    sachu kahu to swar swar ma tmari kavita o vanchi ne mann ma amuk nava vicharo ni leher avi gai hoy evo ehsas thai rhyo che.

    aa kavita mate tmaro aabhar

  9. megha suthar Says:

    i will join this blog hu pan kavit lakhu chu

  10. nilima geria Says:

    tamri lakheli kavita me paheli var vachi. mane lakhvanu game 6.pan kadach avu sunder nahi.hu tamne mari lakhel kavita tamra blog per kahi shaku? mane bhul sudharva ma madad male.

  11. upu Says:

    tu rajkan ma sodhe chhe kan,
    hu kan ma sodhu chhu prem.
    tu ful ma sodhe chhe foram,
    hu foram ma sodhu chhu prem.
    tu danav ma sodhe chhe manav,
    hu manav ma sodhu chhu perm.
    tu jivan ma sodhe chhe jindagi,
    hu jindagi ma sodhu chhu prem.

  12. SHABDSHYAM Says:

    Dear All,

    A Big Thank You to all from Shabdshyam. I am obliged by your wonderful responses. Thanks once again for appreciating my poems. It is and it will always for you all…Take Care,Keep Reading….Regards-SHABDSHYAM.

    shabdshyam.blogspot.in

  13. bhavesh Says:

    very nice

  14. vijay(radhe) Says:

    9998486849

  15. Vijay Patel Says:

    Superb what strong feeling of word

  16. CHIRAG SHAH Says:

    Khubj saras lakyu chey tame.kabar ne pan radva mate majbur kari de tamari aa kavita……..

  17. Chandresh Patel Says:

    Excellent!

  18. sagar patadiya Says:

    mane tamari kavita khub saras laagi 6e.
    jaane laage 6e ke tame kabar ma pan jaan phunki didhi hoy.
    teva tamara aa shbdo mane khub saras lagya.

  19. pankaj solanki Says:

    nice line
    prathna isvarno mobile no. chhe
    netwark ma raho to ring to jarur vage j chhe

  20. raju vanol Says:

    very nice…….

  21. narendra soni Says:

    The ride I rode ….

    My heart sings a gloomy song,
    The path I walk is quite a long,
    Despite the broken hopes are with me,
    The hopes themselves, hope a lot,
    Though the cruel paw of destiny,
    Forever chase to snatch a fate,
    Iron wills of mine do deny to node,
    Nexus with failures I felt like a chain,
    Even the nimrod inside felt much a pain,
    I ride the rode to overcome the flop.

    Narendra Soni.

  22. narendra soni Says:

    Poems
    Narendra Soni.

    Well done work
    Brings,
    Not only wonder
    But also,
    Deep slumber.

    Even if I wish,
    I can’t absorb freshness
    Because,
    I’m full of staleness.

    To acquire…. Empty first,
    And
    To drink…. Have thirst.

    All listen…..,
    When you talk……,
    But I only……,
    When you not.

    Even if I want…,
    I can’t love…,
    Because I’m full of hatred.

  23. narendra soni Says:

    beautifull poems. only a few can understand the cost of real gold, isn’t it true?

  24. narendra soni Says:

    Good poetries, continue. How can our poetries be published?

  25. Ashwin Gandhi Says:

    sabdasham bahu sundar lakho chho thanks
    Ashwin Gandhi From Baroda my emeil ashwingandhi17@gmail.com

  26. Shabdshyam Says:

    Greetings from Shabdshyam.

    I thank you all for your candid words of appreciation.

    I shall always strive to come up with more such meaningful creations to entertain you and to add value.

    Best Regards,
    SAHBDSHYAM

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