યોવન હતુ મારી પાસે…

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8 Responses to “યોવન હતુ મારી પાસે…”

  1. Ramesh Patel Says:

    Shri Chandresh Patel,
    Your words are touching heart
    and this is called poetry.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Ramesh Patel(aakashdeep)

  2. Chandresh Patel Says:

    Namaste Rameshbhai,

    Thanks for the inspiring comment! I have just started writing Kavita. I read many kavya written by you. They all are wonderful! Please guide me where I need to improve in writing kavita.

    Thanks again.
    Chandresh Patel

  3. chinmay joshi Says:

    bahu j sundar kavita chhe..ane aavo to mane pan xperience thayi gayo chhe..jeni jode maare schhol ma koi divas na banyu ene 5 varsh pachhi jyare bahargaam malyo,jya gujarati to thik indians pan bhagye jova male..tyare ame banne behad khush thayi gaya ane aaje best freinds chhe..

    anyways,tame mane kehsho ke hu kayi rite maari kavita aa site upar upload karu,mane kavita post karva mate ni koi link na mali..tame mane guide karsho??

  4. Harish Mehta Says:

    vaaah Chandreshbhai

    Thoda ma khub kahi didhu….
    Who are running after money, What losses they lost that come to know only after times gone…

    Ak Line Yad aveche….
    Jab maro samay hato tab mari pasa samay nahoto, Aj mari pasa samay che to maro samay nathi.

    navu navu lakhata raheso….

  5. Parag Says:

    Chandresh bhai,
    All of your poems are so short and sweet still very very touching to heart. I would like to talk to you if you can send your email address.

    pshah2k@gmail.com

    Regards
    Parag

  6. Vishal Vyas Says:

    Yauvan chhe ane paisa chhe (Jarur purta). . . .
    I am sure my wife has not read this poem, but she told me above lines.. as soon as we got married 4 yr back. I found it true and started enjoying each day of life… and i am happy.

    But i want to tell my young friends, if you don’t want to run after money for whole life, you must have to be disciplined during age of 5 to 25 yr. These are golden year of life that shapes your future. If you can spend these 20 year in doing right things, you will not have to run after money. you will get more then you required. (How much you required – is also linked to those 20 golden years of doing right things !)

  7. Bipin gambhava 'alisan' Says:

    A gazalo aetalej chale 6e kagal na rasta par,
    hradaye kyak tokar kadhi hase agal na rasta par.
    -Bipin gambhava

  8. Bipin gambhava 'alisan' Says:

    Ek mari j gazal post karu 6u.

    A pranay ni aag ma bhalava hu jatoy rahu,
    kantalyo 6u hu ogalava jatoy rahu.
    Bandhan 6e mane ados pados ni kabaro thi ! ,
    nahi tar to aeney hu malava jatoy rahu.
    Vahechay 6e kyak padika ma paththar na dilo,
    aena name loko ne kyarek hu 6alava jatoy rahu.
    Na tu aem man, pan divanagi mane avi mali, balava aemane balava hu jatoy rahu.
    Ne nadiyo su jane a zarana ni jat,
    a kudane j hu fangalava hu jatoy rahu.
    Varsad nahi a mrugjal 6e dost!,
    pyaso 6u hu palalava jatoy rahu!!!
    Bipin gambhava’alisan’

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