Comments on: એક બિનસરહદી ગઝલ

By: hiren raval

hiren raval — Fri, 07 May 2010 07:37:03 +0000

ABHUPURVA………..hERE U STARt a new style……….but great composition…HATS OFF SIR………

By: yousuf pathan

yousuf pathan — Sat, 10 Apr 2010 17:12:22 +0000

MERE BHAI NA IDHAR KOI KHARAB HAI, NA UDHAR KOI KHARAB HAI. MAINE IDHAR BHI DEKHA, UDHAR BHI DEKHA HAI, BHUKHE LOGO KI AAH OR PUKAR IDHAR BHI HAI, UDHAR BHI HAI. YE TO SIRF KUCHH GANDE LOGO KI SAJIS HI HAI. MAINE IDHAR MUSLIM KO DEKHA HAI, MAINE UDHAR HINDU KO BHI DEKHA HAI. OMESHWARALLAH SABKO SANMATI DE.

By: Kaliash - Lost moment

Kaliash - Lost moment — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 12:07:57 +0000

nice poem brother, i really feel that same emotoins should me flowing in many hearts on the other side as well other wise the story will not be complete.

but abs good work brother.

jai mata ji

By: Chinmay Joshi

Chinmay Joshi — Mon, 01 Mar 2010 14:09:20 +0000

nice style of poem writing,but according to me first they(pakistan government & ISI) stop their terrorism shops in POK & only than the peace talks can be done..coz kashmir is logically & legally indian lands..

By: Naren Jhadakia

Naren Jhadakia — Fri, 26 Feb 2010 10:35:54 +0000

Aman ki asha majboot rahe. He Bhagwan, Tu j Khuda chhu to aa par ke pele par napak iradathi gandhata demag ne thik kari nakh ne……..
Samjatu nathi…..aa j tari leela thodi hoy ke ek j desh na be je bhag padya temathi ek hamesha badmashi karya j kare ………

By: sujit

sujit — Mon, 22 Feb 2010 14:39:39 +0000

Tara kavita thi dil saru thai che aa mna safar,
tari kavita to dil thi pan najuk che
su vat karu tari Aa rchanani mani pase word nathi

By: Rakesh Thakkar, Vapi

Rakesh Thakkar, Vapi — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 09:49:02 +0000

very nice
તારામાં મારું હિંદ ને મારામાં તારું પાક,
हर दिल में इसी आस का आवागमन रहे ।