Hi, Chinmay…. i never knew u write such good poem….. its a very beautiful and realistic fact highlighted …. way to go…. all the best for many more….

Hey Chintan, Well said……….but when did u have this amazing transformation to Poet….Really good work

Hey Chinmay….I dint know you are in to poems…keep it up…

chinnaybhai..tame to rang rakhyo,bahuj sunder rite words nu combination karyu

હિંસા-અહિંસા એ કુદરતનો નિયમ-સિક્કાની બે બાજું,
તોય પચાસ વર્ષ વગાડ્યે રાખ્યું કાયરતાનું વાજું..

jai jai garvi gujarat-jai hind

net per gujrati kavita vanchi ghanu gamyu vadhare sari kavita vadhu gamshe

A beautifuly awakening poem…. congratus Chinmay….

thank u all very much, i m delighted to see so many praising feedbacks..i m surprised & thrilled!!!

my goodness! thanks nitaben,as it says truth is always bitter!and thanx for ur appreciations,these kind of replys motivates me to write more poems.

It’s really good coment on non-violence-priest. They must hv to read it b’coz they forgot SHIVAJI-TIPU SULTAN – RANJITSINH. They only remember MR. GANDHI. It’s wrong. All above mentioned name were participate in freedom.

chinmay bhai… same thoughts i m totally agreed and i was same thinking since 15 years, u make poem on it.. hats off man …

The God Fathers of the People are
Political Leaders and Religious leaders…

Politically, India is rulled like a one woman with five husband, those Mahabharat message,,, draupadi could not be saved… even though five were capable to cut the enemy to pieces…

Multiparty rule is spoiling the game of democracy…
Tax Payer’s money is wasted on the Police, and Army to stop violence instigated by foreign powers… all over the India…

India Govt has never cared for even the Borders of Indian Land….
but celebrated the Independence Day and Republic Day whenmently.

China, has once showed its power in 1962… that India should not poke its nose in world affair, but take care of home…
and Now china will do something that will make India permanently handicaaped…
Religious Leaders
are happy when they get big following, big donations, big Ashrams,
But they never advise about the ‘Population explosion, poverty , illiteracy, unemployemnt, power water shortage,’
Religious leaders never advise about ‘ecology, environment destructions’

And every Indian is helpless, what to do… save the home ,,, but the whole India is set to be burned by foreighn powers…

India was attacked in the life time of Gandhiji:
and look at the question I put on yahoo…

“Five Star Diplomacy with Pakistan?
On one hand Pakistan is guilty of killing our men on borders, inciting hate towards India, negotiating terror with all world terror group and housing them in Pakistan in the Name of ISLAM… and Indian Govt is happily forgetting that Pakistan attacked India in 1948, and seized great part of Kashmir,
India Govt is happily forgetting that Pakistan orchestrated War in 1965, first killing the C.M. of Gujarat, and then seizing the great part of Western border.
India Govt is happily forgetting that Pakistan also orchestrated the war of 1971, and though lost the war,,, gained in terms of release of 90000 troops means One Million family members of these 90000 troops were at mercy of India, and yet Mrs.Indira Gandhi fed them and released them with all the humanity.
and even after so much Terrorist attacks, repeatedly inflicted upon India, Indian Govt, bureaucrats, politicians, leaders and public are happily singing songs of ‘great India’ ‘great love’
and recently, today , in border firing , they killed an Indian….
for Pakistan, Indian public is just represents Hindus, and Hinduism… So Islam is to be saved from Hinduism… and that too by Killing the Hindus… so that there is no fear to Islam….
But why so much fear from Hinduism? Hindus are not attacking neighbours, and yet Pakistan is afraid of India.
Pakistan is , just as Indian and as Hindu, as India is,, just the force of Islams countries is keeping Pakistan Govt to dance to their tune.

Why Indian people are allowed to be killed , millions and billions of rupees are poured in Kashmir.
and millions are jobless, hungry, sick, homeless, in other parts of India?
what has gone wrong?”