Comments on: કવિતાઓ

By: poonam valera

poonam valera — Tue, 25 Oct 2011 06:25:38 +0000

ઝારી સ્નેહની લઈને ફર્યા કરું
અમીરસ પાવા તુજને ઝર્યા કરુ
સંગાથે હોય તું તો આવકારું ઉરથી
નહીતર હ જ ઉગુ ને હું જ ખર્યા કરુ
સમયની ઓટ ક્યારેક સ્પર્શી જાય તો
અંતરના કંપનથી ખુદ ડર્યા કરું
ફરી યાદ આવે જ્યારે સમર્પણની
ને આપમેળે જ હું ઠર્યા કરું
અવિરત અર્પવા પ્રેમ તુજને
અંજલિઓ સ્નેહ તની ભર્યા કરું
ઝારી સ્નેહની લઈને પૂનમ ફર્યા કરું
અમીરસ પાવા તુજને ઝર્યા કરું

By: Pansy Catherine

Pansy Catherine — Wed, 17 Aug 2011 12:22:25 +0000

my partner and i play football AND basketball(#(:

By: Girish Sevak,kadana (gujarat)

Girish Sevak,kadana (gujarat) — Sat, 13 Aug 2011 05:23:31 +0000

Bahuj saras Thanks a lot.
My green gujarat

By: Rathod Hasmukh K.

Rathod Hasmukh K. — Sun, 15 Aug 2010 14:12:34 +0000

Mr.Chandreshbhai, tamari kavita ma mane vastvikta dekhay 6e.

By: Rathod Hasmukh K.

Rathod Hasmukh K. — Sun, 15 Aug 2010 14:11:02 +0000

Mr.Chandreshbhai, Kharekhar tamari kavita haday sparshi chhe.

By: Gujaratikavita

Gujaratikavita — Sun, 01 Aug 2010 03:58:16 +0000

Gujaratikavita…

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By: Kishor

Kishor — Fri, 09 Jul 2010 03:20:28 +0000

Chandreshji,

very good expression of your feelings in poetic form.

@Ritaben, everyone has feelings and heart too, and one can express one’s feelings only if one tries to hold the pen and paper to move on.

Poetry is just expression of your feelings shown through the words.

But that expressions ARE THE Poet’s.
If reader gets good vibe, it means both reader’s mind and words of poetry have some tuning…
But patience is needed to know this , feel this, express this..

Thank you….

By: Chandresh Patel

Chandresh Patel — Fri, 18 Dec 2009 14:24:19 +0000

Thank you! Ritaben,
You are right – Katha khoob rangeen chhe! In last Navratri during garba, one newly married couple identified us as a newly married couple. When I replied them – “We have just celebrated our 15 wedding anneversary” and as a proof, I introduced my two kids! Well, to keep katha rangeen, I keep painting my heart all the time by understanding nature’s wonder! I believe, – “Person who search for romance/happiness outside of his/her dish, die hurted and hungry”. Better to search for happiness in what we have.

By the way, first two Kavita are from my real life issue. And 3rd one generate question in my wife’s mind-”which ‘Hagli’ you are missing??!!”:)
Thanks agian!

By: rita parmar

rita parmar — Sat, 21 Nov 2009 03:03:59 +0000

khoob khoob aabhar tamne ,

aama j vyatha kahi chhe, kharekhar eni katha pan khoob rangeen hase. khoob sunder kavita chhe chandres ji.